I loved this, I will reread this again and again, and savor again the details down to the dust, the humor and nostalgia, and hear again all the sounds, including the rhythmic pouring of meter tea, the murmurs of many family reunions, alternations between the crowds and quiet places. This was great.
Incredible! So pleased I finally got around to reading this - all the details build into such eyesight and insight. Just wonderful. Thank you for sharing your experience and talent.
I enjoyed reading your short story. Your narrative unfolds naturally while taking the reader through the landscape of God's own country. Loved the character of Santosh and your mom. When reading I was reminiscing about my trips to Kerala. By the end of reading the short story, Kerala was beckoning me. A great piece of writing!
I know you’re blessed with a creative mind and this piece reiterates your passion and creativity. Shine on!
I loved this, I will reread this again and again, and savor again the details down to the dust, the humor and nostalgia, and hear again all the sounds, including the rhythmic pouring of meter tea, the murmurs of many family reunions, alternations between the crowds and quiet places. This was great.
This was a truly unique experience, wonderfully written. Thanks!
Great read! Wonderfully written Sajan!
Like Trilety, I am happy to have kept this in my inbox and finally gotten around to reading it. The entire story seems so alive vibrant. Well done
Incredible! So pleased I finally got around to reading this - all the details build into such eyesight and insight. Just wonderful. Thank you for sharing your experience and talent.
I enjoyed reading your short story. Your narrative unfolds naturally while taking the reader through the landscape of God's own country. Loved the character of Santosh and your mom. When reading I was reminiscing about my trips to Kerala. By the end of reading the short story, Kerala was beckoning me. A great piece of writing!
I know you’re blessed with a creative mind and this piece reiterates your passion and creativity. Shine on!
nostalgic! nice one saj
I can almost feel the scenes, sensations described.
What a joy to read.... Apart from the diarrhea. But all part of the story and what makes it believable